Thursday, 12 May 2016
Friday, 15 April 2016
Adventure Forest
Adventure Forest
Driving a very long distances going to a unknown place.
All I was thinking about was to get to somewhere where there's fresh air.
We were still driving I was bored because there was nothing to do except me lowering my hand in a bag of popcorn and chips.
Finally we made it , fresh air was a poun us as I leaped out of the truck my legs wobbled it was like my body was a jelly. I was balancing myself. My body suddenly froze I was wondering where my beloved family would be .
There was a cluster of noises coming from the inside of the pitch black forest of pine trees.
I was carefully step by step walking through the trees but then I saw a little bridge. As i was
Crossing the bridge my mind flash before my eyes there was rope, wood, zip lines and slides. Then as I walked a little bit closer I seen my family.
I was tightly gripping my arms around my family hugging them with all my might.
Ideas
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Structure and Language
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Organisation
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Vocabulary
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Sentence Structure
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Spelling
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Punctuation
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Score
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5
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4
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4
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5
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5
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4
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5
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32/4p
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Three thing I need to improve in my writing is to
Use more vocabulary
Write with interesting words
And use Structure and Language and Organisation
MY WHAKATUAKI #4
Whakatauki 4
Wiki 11
EA3: ki te mōhio, ki te whakamārama ngā kōrero o tētahi whakatauki.
Ka tūtuki pai ahau
Ngā kōrero o tōku whakaaro.
He pikitia rānei.
4. Naku te rourou nau te rourou ka ora ai te iwi
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THE GOOD HOUSE REPRESENTS/ AND THE BAD HOUSE REPRESENTS
THE HAPPY MIND /THE ANGRY MIND
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Wednesday, 13 April 2016
Monday, 11 April 2016
MY WHAKATAUKI
Whakatauki
Wiki 11
EA3: ki te mōhio, ki te whakamārama ngā kōrero o tētahi whakatauki.
Ka tūtuki pai ahau
Ngā kōrero o tōku whakaaro.
He pikitia rānei.
4. Naku te rourou nau te rourou ka ora ai te iwi
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This whakatauki means if your kete and my kete were together on the marae we would feed everyone.
When it comes to my school work this means if your brain and my brain work together we will be successful and be excited to learn.
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