Friday, 15 April 2016
Adventure Forest
Adventure Forest
Driving a very long distances going to a unknown place.
All I was thinking about was to get to somewhere where there's fresh air.
We were still driving I was bored because there was nothing to do except me lowering my hand in a bag of popcorn and chips.
Finally we made it , fresh air was a poun us as I leaped out of the truck my legs wobbled it was like my body was a jelly. I was balancing myself. My body suddenly froze I was wondering where my beloved family would be .
There was a cluster of noises coming from the inside of the pitch black forest of pine trees.
I was carefully step by step walking through the trees but then I saw a little bridge. As i was
Crossing the bridge my mind flash before my eyes there was rope, wood, zip lines and slides. Then as I walked a little bit closer I seen my family.
I was tightly gripping my arms around my family hugging them with all my might.
Ideas
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Structure and Language
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Organisation
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Vocabulary
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Sentence Structure
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Spelling
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Punctuation
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Score
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5
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4
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4
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5
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5
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4
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5
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32/4p
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Three thing I need to improve in my writing is to
Use more vocabulary
Write with interesting words
And use Structure and Language and Organisation
MY WHAKATUAKI #4
Whakatauki 4
Wiki 11
EA3: ki te mōhio, ki te whakamārama ngā kōrero o tētahi whakatauki.
Ka tūtuki pai ahau
Ngā kōrero o tōku whakaaro.
He pikitia rānei.
4. Naku te rourou nau te rourou ka ora ai te iwi
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THE GOOD HOUSE REPRESENTS/ AND THE BAD HOUSE REPRESENTS
THE HAPPY MIND /THE ANGRY MIND
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Wednesday, 13 April 2016
Monday, 11 April 2016
MY WHAKATAUKI
Whakatauki
Wiki 11
EA3: ki te mōhio, ki te whakamārama ngā kōrero o tētahi whakatauki.
Ka tūtuki pai ahau
Ngā kōrero o tōku whakaaro.
He pikitia rānei.
4. Naku te rourou nau te rourou ka ora ai te iwi
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This whakatauki means if your kete and my kete were together on the marae we would feed everyone.
When it comes to my school work this means if your brain and my brain work together we will be successful and be excited to learn.
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Friday, 8 April 2016
HOW TO MAKE A SPONGE CAKE
HOW TO MAKE A SPONGE CAKE
WALT:Write a Procedural Writing
INGREDIENTS:
- 4 eggs
- 3/4 Cup Chelsea White Sugar
- 1 Tbsp flour in cup. Fill up rest of cup with cornflour
- 2 tsp baking powder
- 1 Tbsp boiling water
METHOD :
- Separate the egg white from the yolk. Put the egg white into a bowl.
- Beat 4 egg whites until stiff and looks like foam.
- Add cups of sugar. Pour the sugar into the egg. Beat the egg whites until it looks
- glossy .
- Mix in egg yolks with the egg white .
- fill the flour in a cup halfway, fill up the rest with cornflour.
- Fold into mixture.
- Grease tin with butter and flour. Put into a round sponge tin and bake until it looks puffy.
MAKING SPONGE CAKE
MAKING SPONGE CAKE
Step by step walking through the hallway of ice. suffering in the swisspers of the cold hallway making my way to room 1 .
The ingredients were prepared for us to bake a sponge cake.
There was creamy smooth eggs, soft flour, and shimmering sugar.
We also needed a bowl, fork that shied like a star, a measuring cup that was as red as a tomato, and a cake tin that was as black as the night.
The first thing we did was to wash our hands in the cold water that gushed from the tap like a waterfall. Moments later we had to
follow the instruction on paper.
After that we had to depart the yolk from the egg whites and Within minutes we had to mix with all our might it was a mission to whip the mixer over and over again i was the tired of mixing i almost fell into a deep dream of boredom it impossible to finish the job but there only one way to finish the job we needed to work as a team and as we were working as a team the egg was just stiff enough that it was finished .
At that very moment there was another mountain that was stopping us. We had mix harder and more faster than before but the job was complete again.
There was one more mountain to climb. We had slowly transfer the mixer in the cake tin turn the oven to bake and then the fluffy and glossy mixer thrown sweet sponge into the oven of eternal fire.
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